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What do you like about your country?

차유진/2024-10-08

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I love developed and traditional city because Korea is something special. Special things are developed and there are many natural environments and four seasons.
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                                What do you like about your country?


I love developed and traditional city because Korea is something special.
>> Korea is something special because it has both developed and traditional cities, which I love. 

Special things are developed and there are many natural environments and four seasons.
>> Special things are developed, there's a lot of nature, and we have four seasons.
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