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Yes, I know. The king of the United Kingdom is charles |||, he is 75 years old. Unfortunately he has a cancer now. And he is a son of Elizabeth 2.

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Here's your edited essay, Jimmy. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good evening!

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Jean~~

Do you know the king of the United Kingdom?

Yes, I know.

>> OR: Sure, I do.

The king of the United Kingdom is charles |||, he is 75 years old.

>> The king of the United Kingdom is Charles III and he is 75 years old.

Unfortunately he has a cancer now.

>> Unfortunately, he has cancer now.

And he is a son of Elizabeth 2.

>> And he is a son of Elizabeth II.