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류건우/2024-10-08

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Q: What are some parts of the English language that you want to improve in? Why? A: I want to improve my vocabulary and grammer skills in English. I actually don't really know a lot of expressions in English, and I think it's not actually good for being better in English. Also, I think I mess up my grammer when I say or make a sentence.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. I want to improve my vocabulary and grammer skills in English.
>>I want to improve my vocabulary and grammar skills in English.

2. I actually don't really know a lot of expressions in English, and I think it's not actually good for being better in English.
>>I actually don't really know a lot of expressions in English, and it's not actually good if I want to be better in English.

3. Also, I think I mess up my grammer when I say or make a sentence.
>>Also, I think I mess up my grammar when I say or make a sentence.

P.S. I'll take note of this for our class, thanks!
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