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Which among your stuff do you need to throw away?

김예린/2024-10-08

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I have a lot of pretty trash like key holder, little dolls, stickers, act. I used to collect this kinds of cute and pretty stuff which are also not needed to me. These days, I pretend to use these things like putting a sticker to my book, letter. But still I have many, so I need to arrange or throw away. Actually, I really like pretty stuff but I have to stop buying such a things anymore. I have to stand.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Lin! I appreciate your honesty about your collection! It’s great that you enjoy pretty things, but it sounds like you’re ready to make some changes. Organizing or letting go of items can be a helpful step. Remember, it's okay to keep what truly makes you happy while creating space for what you need. You’ve got this!

~T. Jenna

I have a lot of pretty trash like key holder, little dolls, stickers, act.

Correct, or

>>I have a lot of cute clutter, like key holders, little dolls, and stickers.

I used to collect this kinds of cute and pretty stuff which are also not needed to me.

>>I used to collect these kinds of cute and pretty things, but they are no longer needed by me.

These days, I pretend to use these things like putting a sticker to my book, letter.

>>These days, I pretend to use these things, like putting a sticker in my book or on letters.

>> These days, I find myself merely pretending to use these items, such as placing stickers in my books or decorating my letters with them

But still I have many, so I need to arrange or throw away.

>>But I still have many, so I need to organize or throw them away.

>>However, I still have many of them, so I need to either organize or part with some.

Actually, I really like pretty stuff but I have to stop buying such a things anymore.

Correct, or

>>I genuinely love pretty things, but I need to curb my spending on them.

I have to stand.

>>I need to stand my ground.

>>I have to be firm in my resolve.