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Writing task: What kinds of things do people have to give up when they have children? Answer: I think will be most people give up a lot of things, and I feel like Im giving up time especially for me. My daily life is in line with my childrens time.. this makes me feel lonely and feels like Ive lost myself. actually I had a depression that is starting to ruin me. So I had been really need to time for me so I taught my kid to do a lot of things on her self and finally I got a lot of time. when my daughter were nine years old so I could learn swim everyday morning and learn english! this is made me happy.
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Hello, Ms. Nala! I'm so glad to hear that you are finally finding time for yourself again. It might be a slow progress, but it is still a progress. I'm so proud of you! I hope you continue caring for yourself because you are important, and your  children depends on their strong Mom! Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny 
I think will be most people give up a lot of things, and I feel like Im giving up time especially for me.
>>I think, most people give up a lot of things but, in my case, I have given up time for myself.
My daily life is in line with my childrens time..
>>Correct!
this makes me feel lonely and feels like Ive lost myself.
>>This makes me feel lonely and feel like Ive lost myself.
actually I had a depression that is starting to ruin me. 
>>Actually, I had depression that started to ruin me.
So I had been really need to time for me so I taught my kid to do a lot of things on her self and finally I got a lot of time.
>>So, I had to make time for myself that's why I taught my kid to do a lot of things on her own; that's when I started to get a lot of me-time.
when my daughter were nine years old so I could learn swim everyday morning and learn english!
>When my daughter turned nine, I had the chance to learn how to swim every morning and learn English, too!
this is made me happy.
>>These things made me happy.