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Why do people like to watch shows or read books about fantasy worlds?

박소은/2024-10-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
It's because fantasy worlds are funny. I don't know lot's of things because I don't know lot's of things of fantasy worlds.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Sunny!
Let's give examples next time.
They will help you practice explaining your point.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It's because fantasy worlds are funny.
>> Correct
I don't know lot's of things because I don't know lot's of things of fantasy worlds.
>> I don't know a lot about fantasy worlds. 
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