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Imagine you have won ten million dollars. Who will you tell? What will you do with the money?

오소민/2024-10-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I have won ten million dollars, I will spend money to play. And I won't tell anyone about my money.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ridoria! That's so wise of you~ I laughed so hard when I read your answer. I would definitely do the same!
-T. Sonny
If I have won ten million dollars, I will spend money to play. 
>>If I have won ten million dollars, I will spend money on playing.
And I won't tell anyone about my money.
>>Correct!
OR. I will keep it a secret.
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