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Writing task: What is the best place for a vacation in your country?

이승훈/2024-10-03

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I went to Europe 5 years ago. I went to France, Italy, and Rome, and I remember the Eiffel Tower in France. When I went up to the Eiffel Tower,I saw the place where Nafleon was crowned and everything was visible at a glance. I would like to visit again next time if I have a chance.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hun!

Thank you for doing your homework. Just take note of the spelling of 'Napoleon.' I was also curious: from the Eiffel Tower, were you able to see Notre-Dame Cathedral, or did you go there on another trip? Also, it is a dream for me to visit European countries someday, and I hope you can also visit again soon!

- T. Caitlyn

I went to Europe 5 years ago.

>> CORRECT

I went to France, Italy, and Rome, and I remember the Eiffel Tower in France.

>> I went to France, Italy, and the city of Rome, and I remember the Eiffel Tower in France.

When I went up to the Eiffel Tower,I saw the place where Nafleon was crowned and everything was visible at a glance.

>> When I went up the Eiffel Tower, I saw the place where Napoleon was crowned and everything was visible at a glance.

I would like to visit again next time if I have a chance.

>> CORRECT