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Should holidays be spread evenly throughout the year, or is it better to have clusters of holidays d

신봉규/2024-10-02

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I think it is better to have clusters of holidays during specific months. because It's better to take a long break at a time.
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~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think it is better to have clusters of holidays during specific months. because It's better to take a long break at a time.
>> I think it is better to have clusters of holidays during specific months because it's more beneficial to take a long break at one time.
OR >> I believe it is preferable to have clusters of holidays in certain months, as taking an extended break at once is more advantageous.
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