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김재현/2024-09-30

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Hi teacher Divina , Thank you always. I organized the Dailogue part. Can you feedback to it? Richard bought the blender but It was not working. He wanted to get a replacement So,He asked to Samantha Samantha said, Sorry for the inconvenience Samantha asked to him Have you the receipt? He gave it to her So ,She gave to him a new one from the stockroom Homework What were some things that you had returned for replacement? My answer The things that I had returned for replacement was swimming pant and T-shirt because The size didn't fit to me

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

Richard bought the blender but It was not working.

>>Richard bought a blender, but it was not working.

He wanted to get a replacement So,He asked to Samantha

>>He wanted to get a replacement, so he asked Samantha.

Samantha said, Sorry for the inconvenience

>>Samantha apologized for the inconvenience.

Samantha asked to him Have you the receipt?

>>She asked him if he had the receipt.

He gave it to her.

>>CORRECT!

So ,She gave to him a new one from the stockroom

>>So, she gave him a new one from the stockroom.

The things that I had returned for replacement was swimming pant and T-shirt because The size didn't fit to me

>>The things that I had returned for replacement were a swimming pants and a t-shirt because their sizes didn't fit me.