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김재현/2024-09-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Teacher , I organized the dialogue part Can you give me some feedback? Bethany welcomes Felly who comes village Felly asked to Beth " Why don't you eat dinner with me"? Bethany is to refuse an invitation because she was to have a lot of things to do Felly say, The invitation is open anytime. Homework How do you greet people warmly? My answer I will say to people kindly or warmly but If they are not good people , I will treat to them badly
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework. You can ask for feedback anytime.
I'm glad to help!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. Bethany welcomes Felly who comes village
>>Bethany welcomed Felly who came from the village.

2. Felly asked to Beth " Why don't you eat dinner with me"?
>>Felly asked Beth if she could eat dinner with her.

3. Bethany is to refuse an invitation because she was to have a lot of things to do
>>Bethany refused the invitation because she had a lot of things to do.

4. Felly say, The invitation is open anytime.
>>Felly said that the invitation was open anytime.

5. I will say to people kindly or warmly but If they are not good people , I will treat to them badly.
>>I will treat people kindly or warmly but if they are not good people, then I will treat them badly.

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