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Who is your favorite musician, band, or group? How important are they to you?

오소민/2024-09-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't know groups, band, and musician well... But I have my favorite song. Its name is 'way 4 luv'. It is PLAVE's song. PLAVE is K-pop boy group. But, the PLAVE isn't human group. They are virtual group! I was surprised when I know that they are virtual. However, their song is very good! I hope that you listen the 'way 4 luv' someday.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ridoria! That's something new. I've never heard of PLACE before. I'll give it a listen. Thanks for recommending!
-T. Sonny
I don't know groups, band, and musician well... 
>>I don't know groups, bands, and musicians well.
But I have my favorite song. 
>>But I have a favorite song. 
Its name is 'way 4 luv'. 
>>Correct!
It is PLAVE's song. 
>>Correct!
PLAVE is K-pop boy group. 
>>PLAVE is a K-pop boy group. 
But, the PLAVE isn't human group. 
>>But, they aren't humans. 
They are virtual group! 
>>They are a virtual group! 
I was surprised when I know that they are virtual. 
>>I was surprised when I found out that they are virtual. 
However, their song is very good! 
>>Correct!
OR. However, their song is superb!
I hope that you listen the 'way 4 luv' someday.
>>I hope that you listen to 'way 4 luv' someday.
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