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Whale singing

도은경/2024-09-27

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Ye/,they would make some noise just like singing. So they will communicate with other whales by singing. In documentary, I saw they are singing. They sing when they seek their partner or babies.
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Hi Eun Kyeong!^^ 

I also believe that whales can sing. 
Whales are wonderful creatures. 
They may not say the lyrics of their song but the sound they make is really interesting. 

Andrea 

Ye/,they would make some noise just like singing. 
>> Yes, they make some sounds that seems as if they sining. 

So they will communicate with other whales by singing.
>> They can communicate with the other whales by sining. 

In documentary, I saw they are singing. 
>> I watched from a documentary that they are singing. 
 
They sing when they seek their partner or babies.
>> Correct 
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