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장재영/2024-09-27

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I take when go on a trip is phone, phone inverter, and friend or friends. Because make trip more funny.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, James! Thank you for these answers. It's nice sharing a good time with friends and make memories with them. I hope you can go to more trips soon. See you!

--Teacher Anji

I take when go on a trip is phone, phone inverter, and friend or friends.

>> I take my phone, phone inverter and friend or friends when I go on a trip.
Because make trip more funny.

>> It makes the trip more fun.

>> I take my phone, phone inverter and friend or friends when I go on a trip because they make the trip more fun.