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Do you think people help each other because it makes them feel good? How do you feel when someone he

임주미/2024-09-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think we have to help each other ,someone help me also help them too. It makes us happy and a healty society .I am sure that people want to help someone

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Hi, Ju Mi! I agree with you. It's true that a little kindness goes a long way. We should help others as much as we can. Enjoy your weekend! ^^

~T. Jewel

I think we have to help each other ,

>>CORRECT

>> I think we must help one another.

someone help me also help them too.

>>If someone helps me, I will help them too.

It makes us happy and a healty society .

>>It makes us happy and creates a healthy society.

I am sure that people want to help someone

>>I am sure that people want to help others.