>>In my opinion, my country has a good education system.
There are two reasons.
>>Correct!
First of all, our country has a compulsory education system.
>>Correct!
To explain, all of the people have middle school diploma.
>>This means, every one must have a middle school diploma.
So, I think we have high level of education.
>>So, I think we have a high level of education.
So, there are many people with civic consciousness.
>>As a result, most of us have civic consciousness.
Second, we have comparative educational system.
>>Second, we have a competitive educational system.
It means, In Korea, a competitive educational environment is emphasized, which encourages students to study hard.
>>It means, in Korea, a competitive educational environment is emphasized, which encourages students to study hard.
Sometimes it results in bad situations, because heated competitive system makes people tired.
>This could sometimes result to bad situations, since a hyper-competitive system could cause exhaustion to people.
However, this system made country more to be a developed.
>>Nevertheless, this system is what made our country become well-developed.