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김지숙/2024-09-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In the old days, cartoons could learn about family and friendship, but today's cartoons can learn about various topics. In today's cartoons, there are times when there are things I didn't know.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Nicely done, Yira! Keep up the great work! See you in class!
 - Teacher Angela


In the old days, cartoons could learn about family and friendship, but today's cartoons can learn about various topics. 
>> In the old days, cartoons focused on family and friendship, but today's cartoons cover a variety of topics


In today's cartoons, there are times when there are things I didn't know.
>> In today's cartoons, there are moments when I learn things I didn't know before.
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