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If you had to teach a class for a day, what would you teach and why?

박소은/2024-09-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I will don't study. I will make students play and have fun on that day. I am a student so I know how students are hard to go school and study at class. If I can be an teacher I want to give them 1hours of free time.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!
I know it's a bit challenging but you should never give up.
This is good practice for you.
I hope you find it effective to make you work harder.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I will don't study.

>> I will not let my students study.

I will make students play and have fun on that day.

>> I will allow my students to play and have fun on that day.
I am a student so I know how students are hard to go school and study at class.

>> I am a student so I know how hard it is to go to school and study in class.
If I can be an teacher I want to give them 1hours of free time.

>> If I could be a teacher for a day, I would want to give a students an hour of free time.