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임현실/2024-09-26

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Disadvantages of luxury hotels is very expensive, hard to make a reservation,. And biggest Disadvantage is I have no money.
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Hi, Lily!
I agree with you! Luxury hotels' services and facilities might be very good, but they are indeed expensive and hard to book. Also, I feel the same, as I also don't have money! 
- T. Caitlyn
Disadvantages of luxury hotels is very expensive, hard to make a reservation,.
>> The disadvantages of luxury hotels are that they are very expensive, and it is hard to make a reservation.
And biggest Disadvantage is I have no money.
>> And the biggest disadvantage is that I have no money.
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