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Among people who you are not related to, who has helped you most in your life?

임주미/2024-09-26

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Not realated to my family help me most in my life was a collegue . she is older than me 7 years my mento .when I have decide something ,I usually ask her she always told me her opinion or suggestion
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Not realated to my family help me most in my life was a collegue .
>>The person who helped me the most in my life, who is not a family member, is a colleague of mine.
she is older than me 7 years my mento .
>>She is my mentor and is 7 years older than me.
when I have decide something ,I usually ask her
>>When I have to decide on something, I usually ask her.
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>>I usually ask her when I need to make a decision about something.
she always told me her opinion or suggestion
>>She always tells me her opinion or suggestions.
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