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Tell me about your middle school and high school educational background.
노현주/2024-09-25
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
There are so much competition for entering university in korea. I spent whole time to go through the competitiom when i was middle and high school student. I used to like to study hard and went to private classese for math, english and science for get good score from exam.
I got many stressfull to study hard, but i couldn’t recognize it bacause i believed that studying is the only purpose to achieve as a student.
But now i regret. Because I know that studying is not the only one to have to do as a student. I coudn’t enjoy my school life well.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Joo!
Thank you for doing your homework. I also heard about how competitive Korean culture is when it comes to education. Hopefully, even though you were not able to enjoy your school days, your hard work paid off.
- T. Caitlyn
There are so much competition for entering university in korea.
>> There is so much competition to get into university in Korea.
I spent whole time to go through the competitiom when i was middle and high school student.
>> I spent all my time going through the competition when I was a middle and high school student.
I used to like to study hard and went to private classese for math, english and science for get good score from exam.
>> I used to study hard and attended private classes for math, English, and science to get good scores on exams.
I got many stressfull to study hard, but i couldn’t recognize it bacause i believed that studying is the only purpose to achieve as a student.
>> I got a lot of stress from studying hard, but I couldn’t recognize it because I believed that studying was the only purpose of being a student.
But now i regret. Because I know that studying is not the only one to have to do as a student.
>> I used to study hard and attended private classes for math, English, and science to get good scores on exams.
I got many stressfull to study hard, but i couldn’t recognize it bacause i believed that studying is the only purpose to achieve as a student.
>> I got a lot of stress from studying hard, but I couldn’t recognize it because I believed that studying was the only purpose of being a student.
But now i regret. Because I know that studying is not the only one to have to do as a student.
>> But now I regret it because I know that studying is not the only thing I have to do as a student.
I coudn’t enjoy my school life well.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I couldn’t enjoy my school life fully.
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