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김순님/2024-09-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't care where I learn English. I want to place for learning english which has nature like sea or mountains. Because if I go to other country I will have the same chance to speak english where ever I go . If I stay Philippines I will learn skin scubar and swim everyday. If I go to Canada I can go to beautiful mountains. I like wandering in other country without booking a accommodation.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Ms. Sunny!
Your homework shows your passion for learning English but your answer shows hitting two birds with one stone, learning and having fun. Choose wisely^^
Have a great day!
Aki~

I don't care where I learn English.
>>> CORRECT!

I want to place for learning english which has nature like sea or mountains.
>>>  I want to place for learning English in a place that has nature like the sea or mountains.

Because if I go to other country I will have the same chance to speak english where ever I go .
>>> Because if I go to another country I will have the same chance to speak English where ever I go.

If I stay Philippines I will learn skin scubar and swim everyday.
>>> If I stay Philippines I will learn scuba diving and swim every day.

If I go to Canada I can go to beautiful mountains.
>>> If I go to Canada I can go to beautiful mountains.

I like wandering in other country without booking a accommodation.
>>>  I like wandering in another country without booking an accommodation.
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