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류건우/2024-09-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Q: Why are proper greeting necessary? A: I think it's related to social relationships. I think just by having greetings, people can make the bonds or relationships with others stronger and better than before. Also, I think greeting could be the start of conversation for people.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. I think it's related to social relationships.

>>CORRECT!

2. I think just by having greetings, people can make the bonds or relationships with others stronger and better than before.

>>I think just by greeting, people can make their bonds or relationships with others stronger and better than before.

3. Also, I think greeting could be the start of conversation for people.

>>CORRECT!