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I want to let my friends know where am I and what to do there. I will send a few picture and call too

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Hello, Ju Mi! It feels good to share happy memories with others, doesn't it? Thank you for your time and effort as always. Enjoy your day!

~T. Jewel

I want to let my friends know where am I and what to do there.

>>I want to let my friends know where I am and what I do there

I will send a few picture and call too.

>>I will send a few pictures and call them, too.