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What activities do you like to do in autumn?

박소은/2024-09-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I love walking on the autumn. I also like playing in everywhere because the weather is not cold but also it's not so hot so I like the weather when it is autumn.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!
You almost got everything correctly.
We'll have more exercises like this.
Thank you for your participation.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I love walking on the autumn.

>> I love walking in autumn.
I also like playing in everywhere because the weather is not cold but also it's not so hot so I like the weather when it is autumn.

>> I also like playing everywhere because the weather is not cold and it's not so hot so I like the weather when it is autumn.