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류건우/2024-09-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: How can you prevent sweating and shivering? A: I can prevent sweating by being in a cool place. I think there are some pills for preventing sweating, but I think just being in a cool place is better than taking pills. And people can wear more clothings to prevent shivering.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some corrections:

1. I can prevent sweating by being in a cool place.
>>CORRECT!

2. I think there are some pills for preventing sweating, but I think just being in a cool place is better than taking pills.
>>I think there are some pills to prevent sweating, but I think just being in a cool place is better than taking pills.

3. And people can wear more clothings to prevent shivering.
>>And people can wear more clothing to prevent shivering.


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