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What are the things that you care less about now? How did your priorities change over time?

임주미/2024-09-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
As I grew older changed my mind about other's attention . I don't care My priority is happy and a relationship with good fridens.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Ju Mi! Things change, and so do our priorities in life. It's important to regularly reassess what truly matters to us. Anywyay, I hope you'll enjoy your day! ^^
~T. Jewel
As I grew older changed my mind about other's attention .
>>As I grew older, I changed my mind about seeking others' attention.
 I don't care
>>I couldn't care less.
My priority is happy and a relationship with good fridens.
>>My priority now is to be happy and to have a good relationship with my friends.

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