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What significance does Chuseok hold for you personally, and how do you celebrate it?

박소은/2024-09-20

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To me, Chuseok is a time when family gathers together and spends a happy time. The custom of laughing together, having fun, and honoring ancestors is a unique Korean tradition. Hi kelly, I turned on my laptop at 6:10 and couldn't see you. I chatted at 6:14 and you didn't respond. I don't know what's going on.

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Hi Anna!^^

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about Chuseok. I hope you had a wonderful time during the Chuseok holiday. Anyway, I called you on time and sent a message, but a pop-up message on Skype indicated that you were offline. I hope to see you on Monday.^^

~Kelly^^

To me, Chuseok is a time when family gathers together and spends a happy time.

> Correct

OR:

>> For me, Chuseok is a time for family to come together and enjoy moments of happiness.

The custom of laughing together, having fun, and honoring ancestors is a unique Korean tradition.

>> Correct

OR:

>> The tradition of sharing laughter, enjoying time together, and paying respect to ancestors is a distinct part of Korean culture

Hi kelly,

I turned on my laptop at 6:10 and couldn't see you.

>> Correct

I chatted at 6:14 and you didn't respond.

>> Correct

I don't know what's going on.

>> Correct