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What do you want to do this coming weekend?
차유진/2024-09-19
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I want to play games with my family because my mom works for long time resently so I\'m boring.
And my family always see a phone, So I\'m boring.
So I want to play games with my family.
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Hi Cha Yu Jin!
Keep up the good work in doing your homework!
I want to play games with my family because my mom works for long time resently so I\'m boring.
And my family always see a phone, So I\'m boring.
So I want to play games with my family.
And my family always see a phone, So I\'m boring.
So I want to play games with my family.
>> I want to play games with my family because my mom works for a long time recently so I'm bored.
My family always uses their phone, we don't talk that much but I want to play games with my family.
My family always uses their phone, we don't talk that much but I want to play games with my family.
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