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김지숙/2024-09-19

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I recommend Everland in Korea. Because Everland is a famous amusement park in Korea and there are many things to ride.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Shin Woo! You did great on sharing your thoughts. Keep going!

- Teacher Angela

I recommend Everland in Korea.

>> I would like to recommend Everland in Korea.

Because Everland is a famous amusement park in Korea and there are many things to ride.

>> Because Everland is a famous amusement park in Korea, there are many rides.