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How do you usually celebrate Chuseok?

차진혁/2024-09-17

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I and Many Korean peoples go to relative's house and hold a memorial service But some peoples go on a trip to another country.
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Hi Cha Jin Hyeog!

Thanks for doing your homework!

I and Many Korean peoples go to relative's house and hold a memorial service
But some peoples go on a trip to another country.

>> Many Korean people including me go to our relative's house and hold a memorial service and some people go on a trip to another country to celebrate Chuseok.
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