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What are your thoughts on gardening as a job.

차진혁/2024-09-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think gardening as a job is good because surroundings is more beautiful and cool. And watching people feels happy. So I think gardening is very difficult but it is nice.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Cha Jin Hyeog!

Thank you and enjoy the rest of the day ^^

I think gardening as a job is good because surroundings is more beautiful and cool.
And watching people feels happy.
So I think gardening is very difficult but it is nice.

>> I think gardening as a job is good because the surroundings will be beautiful and cool and people looking at the garden will feel happy.
I think gardening is very difficult but it is fun and interesting.