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신하린/2024-09-12
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
1.Do you know he is my brother.
2.Emilia is a great dancer.She has won many competitons.
3.Ross and Monica are siblings.she came to visit the museum.
4.Look at this picture.Isn't it beutiful?
5.I brought a ball today.It is mine.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Harin!
You did so well in this homework, keep it up! Kindly check the spelling of the words first and observe proper spacing, other than that, all your answers are cgood!
You did so well in this homework, keep it up! Kindly check the spelling of the words first and observe proper spacing, other than that, all your answers are cgood!
~Teacher Selene
1.Do you know he is my brother.
>>Do you know he is my brother?
2.Emilia is a great dancer.She has won many competitons.
>>Emilia is a great dancer. She has won many competition.
3.Ross and Monica are siblings.she came to visit the museum.
>>Ross and Monica are siblings. They came to visit the museum.
4.Look at this picture.Isn't it beutiful?
>>Look at this picture. Isn't it beautiful?
5.I brought a ball today.It is mine.
>>I brought a ball today. It is mine.
1.Do you know he is my brother.
>>Do you know he is my brother?
2.Emilia is a great dancer.She has won many competitons.
>>Emilia is a great dancer. She has won many competition.
3.Ross and Monica are siblings.she came to visit the museum.
>>Ross and Monica are siblings. They came to visit the museum.
4.Look at this picture.Isn't it beutiful?
>>Look at this picture. Isn't it beautiful?
5.I brought a ball today.It is mine.
>>I brought a ball today. It is mine.
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