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박소은/2024-09-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think all of the planet is mysterious because the planets are like people, people are all good so I think all of the planet is mysterious.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!

The point you were trying to make is a bit unclear.

I think you have to learn more vocabulary words to express your thoughts.

Keep studying.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think all of the planet is mysterious because the planets are like people, people are all good so I think all of the planet is mysterious.

>> I think all planets are mysterious because they are like people and all people are good in my opinion.