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이한범/2024-09-12

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I clean weekly in my room and I usually remove mixed thing first

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Hi, Han Beom! I bet your room is always organized. ^^ I appreciate the time you took to do your homework. Thank you! Enjoy your day!

~T. Jewel

I clean weekly in my room and I usually remove mixed thing first

>>I clean my room weekly, and I usually start by removing mixed items first.