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Do you think you can teach someone to be successful?

김보연/2024-09-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think I can successfully teach only math to someone. When I turned 16, I became a tutor for my best friend not being good at math. So whenever she asked the math problems to me, I explained those in detail. I had performed as math tutor for a year. At the end, she improved her final math exam score. At the moment, I thought I am good at teaching someone and explaining it to someone is exciting. That's why I think I can teach someone to be successful.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Betty!~
Since math is something I've always wanted to be good at, I'm envious of you for having the skills. 
Chammy
I think I can successfully teach only math to someone. 
>> I think I can only teach someone successfully in Math problems. 
When I turned 16, I became a tutor for my best friend not being good at math. 
>> When I turned 16, I became a tutor for my best friend who is not good at math. 
So whenever she asked the math problems to me, I explained those in detail. 
>>So whenever she asked me about math problems, I explained them in detail. 
OR
>>So anytime she asked me about math, I discussed it thoroughly.
I had performed as math tutor for a year. 
>> I performed as a math tutor for a year. 
At the end, she improved her final math exam score.
>> In the end, she improved her final math exam score.
Or
>> She ended up getting a better grade on her final math exam.
At the moment, I thought I am good at teaching someone, and explaining it to someone is exciting. 
>>At the moment, I think I am good at teaching someone, and explaining it to someone is exciting. 
That's why I think I can teach someone to be successful.
OR
>> For this reason, I believe I can impart success to others.
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