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Do you think you can teach someone to be successful?

이지윤/2024-09-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Yes, I think that's possible. It takes many conditions and abilities to succeed. First of all, you may have to have a lot of knowledge in field, but I think you can teach someone to acquire that knowledge. I also think teaching someone can help you set objective goals. And I think I can also teach someone to keep them in mind to succeed. In a broad sense, I think not only teaching but also being able to help someone become a role model and being an object to laern like a mirror can teach.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!

A more prosperous society can be created by people teaching one another. I think that the more we impart our knowledge, the more successful we become. Thus, I sincerely hope that nobody withholds knowledge in an effort to outperform others.

Chammy

Yes, I think that's possible.

It takes many conditions and abilities to succeed.

>>Correct

First of all, you may have to have a lot of knowledge in field, but I think you can teach someone to acquire that knowledge.

>> First of all, you might need to be very knowledgeable in the field, but I believe you can teach someone to become knowledgeable in it.

I also think teaching someone can help you set objective goals.

>>I also believe that being taught by others may help you in establishing certain goals.

And I think I can also teach someone to keep them in mind to succeed.

>> I think I am capable of motivating someone to remain positive in success.

In a broad sense, I think not only teaching but also being able to help someone become a role model and being an object to laern like a mirror can teach.

>>In a broader sense, I think that not only teaching, but also serving as a role model and being an object of learning like a mirror, can be instructive.