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Can you describe an autumn day?
도은경/2024-09-11
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Leaves turn to red,orange,yellow color.
Dragonflies are playing in the field.
Rices are ripe and lower their head.
People like to go out and have picnic.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Eun Kyeong!
Dragonflies are playing in the field.
Rices are ripe and lower their head.
People like to go out and have picnic.
Thank you for sending your homework.
You did a great job!
Looking forward on your other homework. :)
Andrea
Leaves turn to red,orange,yellow color.
>> Leaves turn to red,orange, and yellow.
Dragonflies are playing in the field.
>> Correct
Rices are ripe and lower their head.
>> Correct
People like to go out and have picnic.
>> Correct
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