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What are your thoughts don't the air quality in your country?

차유진/2024-09-10

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I think my country's the air quality is bad because fine dust and Covid-19 come from China. But dawn air is very good 👍 (fresh air)

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Here's your correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good one!

Cheers,
Jean~~

What are your thoughts don't the air quality in your country?

I think my country's the air quality is bad because fine dust and Covid-19 come from China.
>> I think my country's air quality is poor because of the fine dust and COVID-19 that came from China.

But dawn air is very good 👍 (fresh air)
>> But the air at dawn is very good. You can enjoy fresh air.