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오혜영/2024-09-10

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What was the most exciting adventure you had as a child in your hometown? My house living as a child was closer to a stream. So I usually fished many small fishes and frogs. When I was wating, I had ever seen some snakes. And then my brother and I ran away from there to our mom in house. I wonder if my brother remembers this story. I do my homework, now. Have a nice day.

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Hi, Stella! What a scenery I could I imagine! I appreciate your time doing your homework as always. Take care! ^^

~T. Jewel

My house living as a child was closer to a stream.

>>The house I lived in as a child was close to a stream.

So I usually fished many small fishes and frogs.

>>So I usually fished for many small fish and frogs.
When I was wating, I had ever seen some snakes.

>>While I was waiting, I have seen some snakes, tpo.
And then my brother and I ran away from there to our mom in house.

>>And then my brother and I ran back to our mom in the house.
I wonder if my brother remembers this story.

>>CORRECT

>>I'm curious if my brother still remembers this story.