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What’s the secret to taking a good photograph?

박소은/2024-09-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I am not good at photographing but my mom is good at it. My mom said that to take a good photograph we need to make the person long and tall and we need to take a photograph on a good place so that the back is beautiful. We need to make the person is smiling and bright.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!
Let's continue working hard.
We still have some days to go before the break.
We can do this!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I am not good at photographing but my mom is good at it.

>> I am not good at photography but my mom is good at it.
My mom said that to take a good photograph we need to make the person long and tall and we need to take a photograph on a good place so that the back is beautiful.

>> My mom said that to take a good photograph we need to make the person look tall and we need to take a photograph at a good place with a beautiful background.

We need to make the person is smiling and bright.

>> We need to capture when a person is smiling brightly.