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Homework : What is the most valuable item you've ever spent your money on?

이한범/2024-09-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I bought an apartment about tweenty-five years ago.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Han Beom! Wow. I envy you. It's my dream to buy my own house, too. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. Enjoy your day!
~T. Jewel
I bought an apartment about tweenty-five years ago.
>>I bought an apartment about twenty-five years ago.
OR
>>I purchased an apartment roughly twenty-five years ago.
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