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A recent activity that I enjoyed

노승철/2024-09-10

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The activity that I enjoy these days is exercise at the gym. My goal for exercise was losing my weight. But now I am enjoying the exercise itself because I feel refreshing after exercise. If I skip it because of dinner meeting, I might go to the gym early in the morning for exercise.
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Hi, David.

Great job on your homework! I love how you’ve found enjoyment in exercising beyond just your original goal. It’s awesome that you’re making time for it even when life gets busy. Keep up the positive energy!

Best,
Teacher Dana


The activity that I enjoy these days is exercise at the gym.
>>>The activity I enjoy these days is exercising at the gym.

My goal for exercise was losing my weight.
>>>My initial goal for exercising was to lose weight.

But now I am enjoying the exercise itself because I feel refreshing after exercise.
>>> But now, I enjoy the exercise itself because I feel refreshed afterward.

If I skip it because of dinner meeting, I might go to the gym early in the morning for exercise.
>>>If I skip it because of a dinner meeting, I might go to the gym early in the morning to make up for it.
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