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정하윤/2024-09-10

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What is the best weather to hang out with your friends? Why? - I think no strong sunlight is a best weather to hang out. Because I don’t like that my skin and face burn in the sunlight. So i like it.

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Hi Elizabeth!
Thank you for answering your homework. See you again later :)
~ T. Demi ^^

I think no strong sunlight is a best weather to hang out.

>> I think having no strong sunlight is the best weather to hang out.

Because I don’t like that my skin and face burn in the sunlight. So i like it.

>> I like it because it will not burn my skin and face from the sunlight.