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What was the last thing you did that made you feel so much better?

한다연/2024-09-09

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I went to Busan in korea with my friend last summer vacation. That time, I was so boring with my life because I had studied for TOEIC. It was hard time to go to Busan but when I arrived at Busan, beautiful Gwangandaegyo Bridge made me happy. And I ate so many delicious food like seafood and meat with my friend. It was really healing time for me. I think that rest time is really needed for people.
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Hello Nicole,
You did well in this composition. I truly hope that this precious memory you have will last :)
~T. Demi ^^

I went to Busan in korea with my friend last summer vacation.
>> I went to Busan with my friend during my summer vacation.
That time, I was so boring with my life because I had studied for TOEIC.
>> At that time I was so bored with my life because I was studying for TOEIC.
It was hard time to go to Busan but when I arrived at Busan, beautiful Gwangandaegyo Bridge made me happy.
>> I had a hard time going to Busan but when I arrived, the beautiful Gwangandaegyo Bridge made me happy.
And I ate so many delicious food like seafood and meat with my friend.
>>I ate so many delicious foods like seafood and meat with my friend.
It was really healing time for me.
CORRECT!
OR>> That time was like a healing for me.
I think that rest time is really needed for people.
>> I really think that people need time to rest.
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