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류건우/2024-09-09
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Q: Would you like to work the day shift or the night shift? Why?
A: I want to work the day shift.
I think if I work the night shift, I would be so tired so I can't work normally, and also I can't get enough sleep.
Also, I can just rest at home with the peace if I finish working during daytime.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. I think if I work the night shift, I would be so tired so I can't work normally, and also I can't get enough sleep.
3. Also, I can just rest at home with the peace if I finish working during daytime.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. I want to work the day shift.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think if I work the night shift, I would be so tired so I can't work normally, and also I can't get enough sleep.
>>I think if I work the night shift, I would be so tired that I can't work normally and get enough sleep.
3. Also, I can just rest at home with the peace if I finish working during daytime.
>>Also, I can just rest peacefully at home if I finish working during daytime.
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