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류건우/2024-09-09

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Q: Would you like to work the day shift or the night shift? Why? A: I want to work the day shift. I think if I work the night shift, I would be so tired so I can't work normally, and also I can't get enough sleep. Also, I can just rest at home with the peace if I finish working during daytime.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. I want to work the day shift.

>>CORRECT!

2. I think if I work the night shift, I would be so tired so I can't work normally, and also I can't get enough sleep.

>>I think if I work the night shift, I would be so tired that I can't work normally and get enough sleep.

3. Also, I can just rest at home with the peace if I finish working during daytime.

>>Also, I can just rest peacefully at home if I finish working during daytime.