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Would you rather have more time or more money?

김보연/2024-09-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I would like having more time rather than money. There are 24 hours in a day, but I sometimes feel the time has passed fast and time is so precious. Therefore I want to have more time. Actually If I have more time, I can get more money through my work.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Betty~

As an employee, working longer hours may be necessary in order to earn more money. However, it can be challenging to balance work and personal time. As I get older, I am eager to earn more money to save, but I also want to prioritize enjoying the present moment.~

Chammy

I would like having more time rather than money.

>> I would like to have more time rather than money.

There are 24 hours in a day, but I sometimes feel the time has passed fast and time is so precious.

>>There are 24 hours in a day, but sometimes I feel that time passes quickly and it is so precious.

>>Even though there are twenty-four hours in a day, there are moments when I feel like time is flying fast which makes time even more precious.

Therefore I want to have more time. Actually, If I have more time, I can get more money through my work.

>>I therefore desire more time. Actually, I can work for more money if I have more time.