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What kind of activity do you find invigorating?

김명기/2024-09-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Working out can invigorate me. These days I use a gym on the mountain. There is a small mountain behind my house and a free gym is located there. There are lights, mirrors, and fans. When I go there, I work out using my health app, and then I feel invigorated.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, MK!

It’s been a while since you last did your homework. Thank you for taking the time to answer this question. I totally agree! Working out can be exhausting, but at the same time, it can invigorate someone. Based on what you’ve mentioned, the location of the gym is very convenient for you, so at least you can go there anytime you need invigoration.

-T. Caitlyn

Working out can invigorate me.

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These days, I use a gym on the mountain.

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There is a small mountain behind my house and a free gym is located there.

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There are lights, mirrors, and fans.

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When I go there, I work out using my health app, and then I feel invigorated.

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