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Why do we get bored?

김보연/2024-09-06

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We tend to participate in the activities that we interested in. However If we couldn't feel excited on these activities anymore, we can easily feel bored. Whenever I work some tasks that I don't want to do, I feel bored. Therefore the reason why we get bored is up to our interest.
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Hello, Bo Yeon~
I sincerely appreciate that you always set aside time to complete your assignments carefully and on schedule. Keep on making excellent progress. 
Chammy
We tend to participate in the activities that we interested in.
>> We tend to participate in the activities that we are interested in.
 However If we couldn't feel excited on these activities anymore, we can easily feel bored. 
>>  However, if we don't feel excited on these activities anymore, we can easily feel bored. 
Whenever I work some tasks that I don't want to do, I feel bored. Therefore the reason why we get bored is up to our interest.
>> Whenever I work on some tasks that I don't want to do, I feel bored. Therefore, the reason why we get bored is up to our interest.
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